Completion testimonial review
It's finished!
Originally, this sentence should have been said a few months ago. The problem is that since the update chapter was updated, I have been conceiving the theme and content of the new book for several months. I have not completely finalized the new book and dared not apply for completion. After all, I still have to write a biography! Then we will have to link up!
Okay, let’s not mention the new book yet, next is the time for self-examination:
First of all, I admit that this book "Jilu" is not well written and I am not satisfied with it. What kind of water lyrics are too much water. Besides, the most fatal thing is that there is no outline, I completely let myself write wherever I think of it. The college is simply a failure. The external distribution of characters has empty and soulless characters, and it can even be said to be somewhat redundant and has no effect at all. There are some initial settings, which I forgot about when I wrote later...
The second is to break the update. The breaking is too long, so the plot is broken. The ending in the later stage is a bit hasty, but it is taken for granted. After all, there is nothing to write anymore. You can't just play water every day and make money just because you're not going to make money every day!
In short, two words - bad!
Although I am a newcomer who has been writing a book for the first time, this is not an excuse.
I reflect on these shortcomings, review, and correct them, and will avoid and correct these problems in the new book.
[To be honest, I have been using wild fruit reading to read books and follow updates recently, changing sources and switching, and pronunciation aloud for many tones, www. Android and Apple are available.]
For example, make a list of the outline of the new book, character settings, plot direction, world map, etc.
Describe each supporting role in detail so that it can be flesh and blood, even the most insignificant cannon fodder character.
Adjust your mindset and you won’t be easily led by the trolls.
Don't have water, don't have water... (As I was talking, I couldn't help but start to get water)
In this regard, I expect the new book to be prepared for one or two months, or asxs., see us for the new book~ I will send a chapter to notify everyone!
Chapter completed!