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Revision: Volume 1

Feedback from all readers and the author thought deeply.

The following revisions are made to the main text volume.

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Note: The revisions pointed out this time are only for content, and will not be marked separately for modifications such as punctuation marks, spaces, etc.

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[Wedge Chaos First Opening Pan Gu Kaitian] Modify three places.

The first place

"And this human-shaped mist is the soul of a later generation, named Yi Kun. He was a carefree second-generation ancestor, but on his 21st birthday, his parents died in a car accident, which originally had no major problems." Modified to "And this human-shaped mist is the soul of a later generation, named Yi Kun. He was a carefree second-generation ancestor. But on his 21st birthday, his parents died in a car accident, which originally had no major problems."

The second place

"The great god Pangu felt that it was only a little bit, but the Chaos Sea inside the Chaos Pearl was exhausted, crushing it, and suddenly, countless chaotic auras and countless chaotic treasures burst out from it, turning into millions of streams of light and disappearing between heaven and earth." Modified to "The great god Pangu felt that it was only a little bit, but the Chaos Sea inside the Chaos Pearl was exhausted, crushing it. Suddenly, countless chaotic auras and countless chaotic treasures burst out from it, turning into millions of streams of light and disappearing between heaven and earth."

The third place

"However, he did not have the chance to complain, and fell asleep. The Chaos Pearl was broken, but some fragments were preserved by the great god Pangu, wrapped in the sleeping Yi Kun and a small part of his collection fell into the prehistoric world." Modified to "However, he did not have the chance to complain, and fell into the confusion. The Chaos Pearl was broken, but some fragments were preserved by the great god Pangu, wrapped in the sleeping Yi Kun and a small part of his collection fell into the mountains near Buzhou Mountain, the backbone of the prehistoric world."

Revision time April 24, 2019 at 1506 pm

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[Chapter 1: Pangu’s heart blood in the prehistoric world] Fifteen places to modify.

The first place

"There is a part of the body of an unknown demon god. Not only does one side of the body, but the blood in the body flows out and gathers in the ground, giving birth to a blood cell. When wrapped in the blood cell, it is a young man." Modified to "The half of the body of the Taichu Demon God, who is ranked high in the Three Thousand Chaos Demon Gods, is fortunately not transformed into the nourishment of the prehistoric world. It has infinite luck and is assisted by the power of the heavenly way to nurture a new life. It turns into a placenta with alternating blue and yellow glare. A creature similar to a human-shaped figure in the placenta is slowly stretching its body."

The second place

The original sentence "Yes, it was Yi Kun, a later generation of the Chaos Pearl in the place where the place was crushed by the great god Pangu at the beginning of Kaitian." It was modified to "Yes, it was Yi Kun, a later generation of the Chaos Pearl in the place where the place was crushed by the great god Pangu at the beginning of Kaitian." The word "中文" was deleted and the word "席" was added.

The third place

"At the moment he woke up, he realized a lot of things, and fell next to the body of the chaotic demon god Qiankun, and was mistakenly believed by the heaven and earth to be the ancestor of the innate demon god Qiankun, who should have been born in the prehistoric world.

It should be OK to obtain the qualification of the innate demon god.

The mind is clear, and I have been reborn, and it has nothing to do with my previous life, and there is no Yi Kun in the world.

So Yi Kun immediately swears to the Dao, "The Dao is above, and there is no future Yi Kun in the world. I am the ancestor of Qiankun - Qiankun."

(The following texts are changed to the ancestor of Qiankun or Qiankun name)

As the swearing of Qiankun, a few thunder flashed across the cave, which was considered to be the oath of Qiankun. There was no future generation in the world.

At the same time, Dadao also recognized his identity as the innate demon god of Qiankun.

You have to ask him why he didn't swear to the heavenly way, but to the great way.

Qiankun is Yikun who has traveled through time since later generations. It is an anomaly and will definitely be unwilling to be by the great way and the heavenly way. Only by giving up everything from before, starting from scratch, and becoming a member of the prehistoric world can it no longer be an anomaly and its identity is authentic.

Of course, when Qiankun swears, he also acted as a small matter, and he swears directly to the Great Dao, not the Great Dao. Now, the Great Dao has just been reborn and has not yet awakened. The entire Great Dao is still under the control of the Great Dao.

At this moment, after swearing to the Great Dao, even if the Heavenly Dao awakens, he cannot find out the past of Qiankun. He only knows that he is the innate demon god Qiankun Demon God born from heaven and earth.

If there is no problem with the memory of later generations, then he does not have much favorable feelings for the prehistoric way of heaven.

How many innate demons died by it? In a good sentence, the world is ruthless, the way of heaven is even more ruthless, and all things are straw dogs.

Of course, I don’t have much affection for the Great Dao.” This big passage was modified to “After waking up for a short moment, he realized a lot of things. After the great god Pangu transformed into all things in the vast world, he was specially taken care of by the great god Pangu and fell into the mountains at the foot of the Buzhou Mountain.

I don’t know if this half of the body of the Chaos Demon God was found by God Pangu for him or if it appeared unexpectedly.

In short, it has inexplicably become the first innate demon god Qiankun born in the prehistoric world.

Innately, he mastered the Qi of the Qiankun and held the law key of the laws of the Qiankun.

I don’t know how much the starting point is higher than others.

If you become clear about your mind and be reborn, you will not think about the things in your previous life.

It is good to live in the present.

As for the way of heaven, swear to the way of heaven.

He wouldn't be so bored. The ancient heavenly way hasn't woken up yet, and the secrets of the ancient earth are blurred.

I am now the innate demon god in the prehistoric world. The prehistoric heavenly way is the commander of the prehistoric world. As long as there is no chaos in the prehistoric world, can it control it?

As for the great way above the heavenly way, will you really care about yourself?

After all, before Pangu opened the sky, he had possessed himself in the Chaos Pearl for so many years, and he didn't even give him a fart.

Yes, compare the Tao to a person, and you are an ant.

One day, there was an ant in the ant nest you raised, densely packed. Can you find it?

I'm afraid you won't be able to find it if you hold a magnifying glass for countless years.

What's more, there is chaos in your ant nest, and you will be even more unable to check it out.

As for the calculation of the Tao of Heaven, as for the calculation of the Tao of Heaven.

I believe your ghost.

Have you heard a sentence in the tomb robbery novel "The Tomb Raiders Chronicles" written by the famous later writer Nanpai Sanshu?

"What is more terrifying than ghosts and gods in this world is the hearts of the people!"

He Yi Kun, oh, no, now it should be called Qian Kun.

I don't believe in those.

Now we have gained new opportunities and started a new life.

"As a new generation of Taoists, I should 'I am a rebellious young minister, and I do not believe in ghosts, gods, and people'."

The fourth place

The scene where the great god Pangu raised his head to yelled at Chaos at the last moment, "He is a son of man!" was always in his heart, and he couldn't forget it even if he wanted to." Change the word "Yi" to the word "Qian".

The fifth place

The three sentences were deleted, "The trick I just played makes Qiankun no longer worry about this. At least, if you have memories of later generations, you will definitely live longer than the ancestor Qiankun originally designed according to the world. From then on, Qiankun no longer needs to worry that someone will find out his past and will not reveal his origin."

The sixth place

Change the "It's like a sentence circulating on the Internet" to "", and when "Life is like rape, when you are powerless to resist, then lie down and enjoy!" Double quotes were added on both sides. At the same time, change the "Then lie down and enjoy" to "!"

Place 7

"Think about it, Qiankun and Sanqing, Twelve Ancestral Witches, Gui Yin Zhunti, Nuwa Fuxi, Di Jun Taiyi and Di Jun Taiyi are all innate demon gods, and their starting point is far higher than other prehistoric creatures." "But the Sanqing, Gui Yin Zhunti and Nuwa became saints of heaven, and although Di Jun Taiyi and Twelve Ancestral Witches were basically dead, the Twelve Ancestral Witches, as the leader of the Lich, at least they are dominating a great disaster. Even Kunpeng and Zhen Yuanzi left their own legendary stories." The two sentences were modified to "Think about it, Qiankun and Sanqing, Twelve Ancestral Witches, Gui Yin, Zhunti, Nuwa, Fuxi, Di Jun, Taiyi are all innate demon gods, and their starting point is far higher than other prehistoric creatures.

"But the Three Qings, Gui Yin, Zhunti and Nuwa became the saints of the Heavenly Dao, while Di Jun, Taiyi and the Twelve Ancestral Witches. Although they were basically dead, the Twelve Ancestral Witches, as the Lich leader, were at least dominating the great tribulation. Even Kunpeng and Zhen Yuanzi left their own legendary stories."

Location 8

"Where is Qiankun?" "As one of the innate demon gods, but he did not leave his own myths and legends, it was simply in vain." The layout was changed to make it two rows.

The ninth place

Delete "Maybe, the great god Pangu will succeed in proof of the truth.

So, Qiankun already had a little thought in his mind.

Of course, it is necessary to attain enlightenment, but it is not the saint of heaven in the prehistoric world.

Instead, the Hunyuan Daluo Golden Immortal has achieved enlightenment. Although it lacks the blessing of the power of the heavenly way in the prehistoric world and cannot have endless magic power, its realm is indeed comparable to that of the prehistoric world saints, and it is not restricted by the prehistoric world.

It's a freedom, and it's a profound meaning."

Point 10

Delete "Back to the Cave."

Place 11

The word "chaotic" was added before "because he discovered that although Pangu crushed his Chaos Bead without permission at that time, causing him to lose the Supreme Treasure Chaos Bead and countless collections".

Location 12

Change the "but when it was broken, I still cut off some Chaos Bead fragments and a small part of the collection." In "Seal some" to "Seal the main one"

Location 13

The sentence "I stayed by my side, and I don't know if it was a coincidence that the most complete body of the demon god in Qiankun became the current one." was divided into two sentences, and the sentence "I stayed by my side" moved to the previous sentence. The rest of the cuts were removed.

Location 14

After that, the word "Zhongzhong Ce is the second body to differentiate, he learned from Pangu's great god to create the world and use his strength to prove the Tao and transform all things." The four words "achieve yourself" were added.

Location 15

Modify the bug, and the half-completion merits of the protagonist Qiankun have become 40%. All subsequent changes have been made.

Modification time April 24, 2019 at 1542 pm

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